Look at me

Posted: July 3, 2010 by Marya in Poems
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What do you see, when you look at me?
something you want, deep down you know.
If only I could make you see,
This love for you will never go.
If only I could make you smile,
maybe not for long.
For just a little while,
then you’ll realize how I feel is not wrong.

If only you look beyond the outside,
It’s what is in me that wants to show you how.
That I will love you,
If you you stay with me right now.

But if fate does not go my way,
and you choose not to love me.
I will have to wait for another day.
For then the real me you will see.

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Comments
  1. adkwriter15 says:

    I can so relate to this – great poem!

  2. slpmartin says:

    Brings to mind the saying about not judging a book by its cover…I’m afraid we live in a very vain world society…rather enjoyed your poem.

  3. Marya says:

    Thank You and happy you enjoyed it eh .. have an awesome day eh!!

  4. Jingle says:

    cute you, I will link you in..
    😉

  5. Jingle says:

    Happy July 4th!

  6. Chilton says:

    it’s so difficult for some people to look beyond physical beauty!!

  7. Marya says:

    Your so right, sad but true.

  8. mitchicus says:

    I really loved this poem. It’s a great way to revamp the saying “dont’ judge a book by it’s cover”

  9. Great poem…I really like it.

  10. Fatesjoke03 says:

    So sad that this is often the way we find ourselves thinking. Nicely said and a great poem.

  11. Marya says:

    Ty everyone for liking my poem 🙂

  12. Jingle says:

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/11/happy-belated-birthday-plus-get-well-soon-wishes-4-five-friends/

    please help visit 5 people,
    wishing them Happy Belated Birthday or Get Well Soon.
    Thank you in advance!
    cheers!

  13. Olivia says:

    Yeah- I have had a very similar encounter myself.. I guess it’s my turn already – poor soul..
    Your words took me back to some very beautiful and not so ones memories- all at once..
    🙂

  14. Olivia says:

    Hello, friend, how are you?

    I invite you to our Monday Poetry Potluck Party at Jingle Poetry Community, a new place for poets who share ans encourage…

    We have features such as poem of the week, poetry blog of the week, and poet of the week, plus Sunday poetry news dispatch, if you attend our Monday Party, there is a chance that you poetry blog is represented by one of our officials, and your talent will be highlighted or exposed to wider audience,

    No specific rules, simply linking in 1 to 3 poems, it could be an old poem, let us read and comment for you. Feel free tasting other poetry treats, all enjoyable expereicne…

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/09/poetry-potluck-big-bang.html

    Click on the link, you will see a blue button, click on the blue button, you will see three boxes, your specific poem link to be placed in first, then your name or blog name, then your email connected to your blog….

    Happy Monday!
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    Cheers!

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