What is this we see?

Posted: December 2, 2010 by Marya in Poems
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Window panes come crashing down
Amidst the tears and pain
Vanishing hopes are gone and flew away
Up above through twilight
Shadows cast across the floor
Reflections of the past
Trembling thoughts of one
Dwelling deep within the soul
A mystical sense of reality
Captured by the craze
All in bewilderment
Of the shock in the wave
Creatures of the dimness
Chattering amongst the green
Everything slows in stillness
What is this we see?

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Comments
  1. Jingle says:

    Everything slows in stillness
    What is this we see?..

    lovely wonders…
    Thanks for sharing…
    Happy Rally.
    😉

  2. Marya says:

    Ty for Allowing me to share…

  3. Yola says:

    Deep, mystical and emotional. Love it!

  4. everything slows in stillness.. beautiful writing.. nice to find you from Jingle. here is mine:
    http://rrel.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/different-forms-as-treasures/

  5. danroberson says:

    It seems when our life comes crashing down we are left in pain and silence. And always there are questions. Beautiful poem.

  6. I like how you randomly used rhyme, and questions–a thought provoking poem.

  7. I agree, this is a thought-provoking piece. The mystery makes it all the more interesting. Good flow, too.

  8. jargnar says:

    a time-eluding masterpiece 🙂
    fantastic 🙂

  9. Marya says:

    Thanx so much for enjoying my Poem..

    Have an awesome week end

  10. somewhere else says:

    mysterious but somewhat familiar

  11. Seasweetie says:

    Lovely, although I feel a sense of breaking, wrenching pain. Thank you for sharing.

    My Thursday Poet’s Rally submission is here:
    http://seasweetie.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/haiku/

  12. Kim Pugliano says:

    Shadows cast across the floor
    Reflections of the past

    love it…

  13. says:

    “Everything slows in stillness
    What is this we see?”

    We all see something, a little bit different. Hopefully, in the long run, it all turns out beautiful.

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